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Whitefish MS, Persuasive Essay, 6 periods

Thursday, January 12, 2023
8:50 am3:30 pm
These sessions are requested by 8th grade teacher Angie Finberg at Whitefish  MS, 1 Draft

*title--strong?
*good hook?
*thesis statement--supported with detail throughout?
*elimination of pronouns (you, I especially) in research work. reword? eliminate?
*proper MLA in-text citing format
*is their argument sound? well supported? holes in the logic? additional support needed?
*complex sentences
*strong word choice
*proper paragraphing?
*conclusion--sense of closure, call to action?